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In my previous blog, I mentioned the ideas I was considering to compare and contrast two distinct poems. Which I based on my second essay "I Don't Love You Just Need You". In an earlier blog, I had also mentioned my ideas for a first essay topic over a comic novel Stitches. I have recently been assigned to write a third essay over either one of those essays. After considering both my options I decided to write over my second essay "I Don't Love You Just Need You." Not only am I interested in the topic myself, but I believe it would be much easier to find research over it.


So for my third essay, I plan to revise and editing my second one by adding more information over my topic. I will start by correcting any mistakes I had made originally.  For example, grammar, and punctuation, so my essay has a better flow. including my citations and errors with the MLA format.

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After fixing those original mistakes I plan to add more information over the fear of love answering questions that a reader might have when reading my essay. Perhaps questions like "what is relationship idealization?" " Why does someone experience a fear of ending a relationship?" "what causes someone to stay in a relationship that is no longer healthy?".

My English professor, Mr. Hamby, suggested searching databases for our research. Although it has not been easy finding many credible sources over this topic I have found very few that might work in my favor. I also plan to use a packet of information that my professor handed out. Maybe find some books in the library to check out if I still need more sources and information.

With more reasearch, I will be able to better explain my thoughts and factuate my claims for my upcomming essay.

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